Does the reader need this information now?
Start here, then go back to the page and see what the manuscript gives you.MANUSCRIPT PROBLEM
How much worldbuilding is too much?
There is no magic amount of worldbuilding that is “too much.” The better question is whether the information is doing something for me right now—orienting me, making me curious, changing the stakes, or affecting what I expect.
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We would not automatically cut worldbuilding. Some of the richest parts of a story are there precisely because the world has weight. The issue is whether the information arrives before I have a reason to want it.
FIVE QUESTIONS
What we would look for first
Does it change what the reader understands or expects?
Start here, then go back to the page and see what the manuscript gives you.Can the information be carried by action rather than explanation?
Start here, then go back to the page and see what the manuscript gives you.Is the reader receiving several new concepts before they have anchors?
Start here, then go back to the page and see what the manuscript gives you.Does the same information recur unnecessarily?
Start here, then go back to the page and see what the manuscript gives you.WHERE A DEEPER READ HELPS
Stay with the reaction before deciding what to change.
We would look at when the information arrives, what the reader can anchor it to, and what changes because they know it. That tells us much more than a word-count rule ever could.
A POSSIBLE NEXT STEP
Bring the question, not a diagnosis.
You do not need to arrive knowing which editorial service you need. If you want another pair of eyes on the actual manuscript, this is the route that fits the question above.
IF YOU ARE STILL NOT SURE
That is useful information too.
Sometimes the most honest starting point is simply, “Something isn't working and I cannot quite tell why.” You can start there.